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Post by Corsenna Tue Sep 06, 2016 3:49 pm

This is how I want characters to be submitted (Please be mindful of power-scale. If anyone's character gets too Overpowered or out of control an Admin character will go god-mode and take care of the problem. You will however be informed and given a chance to go back and edit any posts before that happens in the interest of fairness, but the easiest way to prevent such things is to keep your characters at a controlled power-level before that happens. The general scale right now is based on Exalted characters but some people may not be aware of what that entails so there will be a Power Level topic where you can ask any questions you may have before submitting a character) Also be mindful of your character's appearance, remember this will take place in a universe where supernaturals/divines do not exist, all characters of those types will be pulled in from other universes. Feel free to use a character that is obviously inhuman but you will want to come up with a way of concealing your inhuman nature. Any inhuman character will have the option to have been pulled into this universe up to (but no more than) 12 years ago. Anyone that wants to be a completely non-supernatural, totally normal human has the option to have been in this universe from birth as long as they want to be native to this universe, otherwise even if they're a plain human they still follow the rule of having been pulled her up to (but no more than) 12 years ago.

Name: Your Character's name, easy.
Universe: Where your character is from, less easy. If you character is from an existing RPG system or fandom add that here incuding if it's an RPG, anime, movie, book, and so on. Otherwise provide a brief 2-3 sentence explanation of where the character is from (yes I know how hard that is)
Type: What is your character? If your character is from an existing tabletop this is where you would put race and class, otherwise use a simple descriptor like 'dragon' or 'vampire' you probably get the idea.
Physical Appearance: In addition to filling out the following information you may add a picture. Please include the following information (where applicable) about your character - Eye color, hair color, skin tone/type (by type I mean anything other than regular skin, like if your character has scales, fur, feathers, or anything like that), Height, Weight (Not necessary to use actual an actual number - you can leave it at descriptors like heavy set, overly thing, anything like that), Distinguishing Features (does your character have scars, tattoos, piercings, or anything else), Style (How does your character dress?), Posture (How does your character carry themselves? Are they rigid or relaxed?), Other Notes (Anything that might be missed to help us build a mental image of your character)
Occupation: How does your character make money?
Specialties: What is your character good at? This is separate from combat abilities. This would be things like hunting, sewing, farming, languages.
Distinguishing Powers: Does your character use magic? Shapeshift? Fly? Tell us those things here.
Combat: Does your character fight? If so this is where you'd put in any special abilities that help with that. For example do they use martial arts, guns, swords...
Personality: How does the character act? Try to keep it reasonably brief, most of this can be learned through in-character actions, this category is more for helping others understand the types of characters already included so we can avoid too much clashing - though a little drama is always great.
Background: This is the history of your character. I understand how backstories are, but please try to keep it reasonably brief.

For Example

Name: Woneyi Roxil (Roxil)
Universe: Exalted (RPG)
Type: Lunar Exalt, Changing Moon Caste
Physical Appearance: Eye color: Green/Silver. Hair: Black, little longer than shoulder length. Skin tone/type: In Human True Form-medium/dark tan, otherwise it's variable. Height:In Human True Form-6 foot 4 inches. Weight: Slim but muscular. Distinguishing Features: Covered in Moonsilver caste-fixing tattoos, has a few very faint scars from burns,abuse, and injuries, also has three stones implanted directly into his body. Style: Roxil is very rarely fully clothed, sometimes not at all. Posture: Very relaxed and easy going. Other Notes: Roxil is unreasonably attractive (in Exalted terms the average person has an Appearance score of 2, Roxil has a 5 and multiple appearance enhancing charms.) He also has a tell-features unique to Lunar exalts related to their spirit forms, other people may not be able to see these (That can be discussed in the OoC forum) his tell is a 2-parter, he has cat ears and a gloriously fluffy tail.
Character pictures in the spoiler box.
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And another picture showing more of the tattoos. Beware of nudity! (Don't worry, none of his manly bits are showing), And yes I know the coloring of the hair and tail are really poor quality but my black marker is dry and I was impatient so I used a charcoal block. I also forgot (hurray me) to color the visible hearthstones before coloring his skin and didn't even realize it until I started working on his tattoos.
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And this is his new drawing with the more modern clothing.
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Occupation: False God? Aside from being a Steward of Creation Roxil used to be a thief, now he hangs out in his own personal temple enjoying the praise and offerings of hundreds of humans. Best. Job. Ever.
Specialties: Thievery and being pretty, pretty is a skill now because Roxil.
Distinguishing Powers: Roxil's most distinguishing power in this setting is the one intrinsic to being a Lunar - Shapeshifting. He learns new shapes through the Sacred Hunt and drinking the Heart's Blood of a desired creature, from that point on he can take that shape. He has several knacks and charms that enhance this ability. For those who are already familiar with this character I did add 3 knacks after he was retired from the Exalted campaign; he now has Twin-Faced Hero, Prey's Skin Disguise, and Lunar Blood Shaping Technique - for anyone that isn't familiar with those things ... you'll probably figure out what they do eventually Razz
Combat: Roxil uses hand-to-hand (hand-to-claw?) combat, never weapons ... unless you count teeth and claws.
Personality: Incredibly confident and stubborn. He loves everyone as long as they're good people, if they aren't good people he hates them and has no reservations about saying so. He loves taking naps in the sun, drinking, sex, drugs ... he's pretty much a vice kind of guy. Roxil does not know how to read or write and beware, this particular character also seriously has the dumb.
Background: Roxil was abandoned by his parents as a baby and instead raised by slaves as a slave. When he was about 9 the owners culled their workers, burning them all alive so they could replace the whole lot of them easily. Roxil escaped and lived on his own wandering across Creation stealing what he needed to survive. Along the way he ran into other orphans and the like teaching them the skills he had so they could work together stealing what they need. He and his thieves eventually settled down in the east even founding a village for anyone that wanted to escape the poverty and/or injustice experienced in the cities of the Realm. His little village was attacked one day and he nearly died trying to save them but Luna saw his love for Creation and Humanity giving him one of her Exaltations and all the power that went with it. From that day on the people of the village started to worship him even going so far as to start 2 other small villages with temples devoted to him.


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Post by Lenso Thu Sep 08, 2016 10:37 pm

Hello! This is my submission for my character, Dr. Lenso.
Name Dr. Lenso
Universe Mass Effect
Type Salarian Scientist
Physical Appearance Green Gold eyes, no hair but two horns, Yellowish Green smooth reptilian skin,5'7", Slight and slender build, Lenso has a living backpack on his back; it is organic and can unfold to a surprising size, Lenso wears bulky clothes gloves and obscures his face with a low hood, Lenso appears as a shiftless bum pushing around a cart mumbling to himself unless he is revealing his true self, in which case he's a hyperactive maniac with a living Dr. Oct style backpack, Backpack's true function is that of a mobile lab
Occupation Currently Lenso doesn't make money, he's busy collecting samples of all the neat specimens he's just discovered. He'll grow some food if he gets really hungry, but dumpsters also have all sorts of things to catalog anyways...
Specialties Lenso is the greatest genetic engineer in all of Salarian history. It was his groundbreaking work in viral genetic mutology that allowed the development of the Genophage, and subsequent use. If it has dna, Lenso can manipulate it.
Distinguishing Powers Lenso's incredible genius is his best asset, he is a legendary intelect. Also he has an organic abomination for a travel lab that he attatched to himself.
Combat Lenso is not much of a fighter, but he has a genetic lab with sharp legs and teeth on his back, so he has a plague up his sleeve about at all times
Personality Lenso is curious about the world to a fault. If he comes up with an experiment on the fly, hes doing that with his next breath. He won't directly harm anyone he considers a friend, but he also considers anything he could fix couldn't possibly be harm. (aka, he'll put bubonic plague in your bed if you got on his bad side but he still likes you and will fix you right up in a day or two, definitely before you die)
Background Frozen for generations, after finally being awakened Lenso went out to fix his works wrongs. Along the way he made some friends, and was just getting ready to say "Hi" to them after a long time when, BLAM, he's on some sort of alternate Earth with no idea how to get back.

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Post by Phantomzaber Fri Sep 09, 2016 5:09 pm

Name: Alex Crofton
Universe: Palladium Rifts - Earth.  CIty of EAS (Pronounced like ACE)
Type: Human Mech Pilot
Physical Appearance:
Eye color: Brown
Hair: Dark Brown
Skin tone/type: Tanned caucasian man from working out in the harsh sunlight in his home town.
Height: Six feet One inch
Weight: Rather physically imposing, While most of the work on his mech suit is done by his twin sister who is an accomplished engineer, he does his share of deadlifting mechanical parts into place for field work.
Distinguishing Features: Large scar over his right eye and a roughly trimmed, but close cut beard.
Style: Alex will probably be confused for a long distance truck driver in current times.  His clothes are generally some sort of denim pants and flannel shirt or stained t-shirt.  It's hard to do your laundry after the apocolypse.
Other Notes: In his pack he will be carrying a large green scaly egg.
Occupation: Mercenary / Hired Gun
Specialties: Extremely knowledgeable about technology. He comes from a future where the cityscapes have been turned to rubble, and yet unbelievable technology was wrought from the wreckage.
Distinguishing Powers: None
Combat: Fantastic gun fighter, but also proficient in hand to hand combat with balded weaponry.  Heavy weapons trained, and capable of piloting aircraft, watercraft, and land craft.
Personality: Alex is very protective of characters whom he feels are vulnerable.  He usually prefers to plan and calculated odds before taking actions, but has definitely been known to shoot first and ask questions when startled.
Background: Alex grew up in a post apocalyptic wasteland.  His mother, sister and he were on the run through most of his childhood.  He doesn't recall meeting his father, but he looks up to him as a hero. Piloting mechs is in his blood, as both of his parents were Chi-Town mech pilots as well.  He is very protective of his pack and the egg inside of it.

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Post by amanthatlookedlikeme Sat Sep 17, 2016 12:48 pm

Name: Yukiyama Izumi (雪山イヅミ)
Universe: Adeptus Evangelion
Type: Evangelion Pilot. Outside the Eva, regular high-school girl.
Physical Appearance: Eye Color: A deep blue, almost purple in the right light. Hair Color: Jet black. She wears it down, not quite to her shoulders in a bob. Skin tone: Probably lighter than you’d expect. Height: 5’ 0”. Weight: Waif-fu. Distinguishing Features: Despite her small size, one can make out her muscularity quite easily if looking for it. No tattoos, no scars. Style: When outside of school, you’d probably find her in a black halter under a t-shirt and skinny jeans, with a pair of ribbon pins in her hair. Posture: Reserved, arrogant, and sometimes menacing, unless you can calm her down.
Occupation: Well, she was getting a stipend from NERV for piloting, but in this new universe…
Specialties: Izu has an incredible intelligence; she’s a quick thinker and picks up new topics with ease. She has a bit of an interest in the sciences, and will sometimes throw out facts and formulas to show people why they’re wrong. Her perfectionism has led her to be athletic. She practices Kendo, Karate, and Aikido.
Distinguishing Powers: What? She’s just a regular human when not in the Eva. Why would she have powers or magic? Next question.
Combat: She’s strong and quick enough that she can knock out a regular person in a single punch.
Personality: Izu is a perfectionist, and can be very high-anxiety because of this. She suffers from depression, even though she’d never admit it. She can be haughty and disdainful, especially to those weaker or stupider than her (by her measuring, at least). And if you’re deformed in some manner, well, don’t expect any favors…
Background: Izu is well aware of the fact that she is an artificial human created for the sole purpose of piloting an Evangelion, and will absolutely keep that a secret. Much of her life and training has focused around both regular schoolwork and skills for piloting, which can leave her a bit naïve about how much of the world goes on, especially in a world she’s never seen before.

However, in reality, she is…
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Post by Ijiro Sun Oct 09, 2016 5:47 pm

Will change if people want. Many thing are copy from Spikes description of Kaytee. Sara help me with other things.

Name: Kaytee (Is really 7 people, oldest is dormant. Kataleina (Cat-a-lay-na), Kieran, Amalaya, Yazish, Tiore (Tee-or), Emiylea (Em-ill-eh), and Ezekeal)
Universe:
Corsenna wrote:giant sentient space tree
Type: Alien plant
Physical Appearance: Eye color-changes between Blue, Green, Red, Purple, Orange, and Black. Hair color-Black. Skin tone/type-changes between Blue, Green, Red, Purple, Orange, and Black. Height-186 centimeter, Weight-very thin, Distinguishing Features-skin shimmers very faintly, color of eyes and skin shows where light shines on hair. Style-Prefer very simple uniform of home job (in picture), Posture-Relaxed, very loose. Other Notes-Reason colors change is based on dominant personality at the time. Color is usually Blue from youngest sibling.
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Occupation: Al hired her as bartender/security.
Specialties: Good at politics and magic of many kinds.
Distinguishing Powers: Copy and paste from Spikes description - Kieran uses Nature magic, manipulating the world around him. Amalaya is their best at glamour magic altering their appearance, and that of others. Yazish uses no magic, instead he focused all of his dominant time on training their physical strength and unarmed combat. Tiore focused on fire magic. Emilea has learned the techniques of every weapon she can get her hands on. Last, Ezekeal is studying ice magic.
Combat: Is very good a physical combat but prefer magic.
Personality: Is very cocky about physical and magic ability and intelligence.
Background: She was an Enforcer, one of the lawkeepers, warriors, and politicians of her people. She was being sent away to negotiate peace with the people of a nearby planet but her Seed was taken off course by an asteroid that nearly destroyed her. Over 300 years after she should have arrived at her destination she crashed instead on Earth. Kaytee refers to herself as female and has a female body due to her oldest sibling, however the oldest is actually male now as Kataleina's personality was sealed after an incident in which she committed the taboo of connecting her mind with the Mother Tree's and went insane.


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Post by AlleKote Mon Oct 30, 2017 1:29 pm

So I guess I haven't actually decided for sure but I can always come back and change this before I start posting if I decide to go a different way, right?

Name: N-02, Jatne
Universe: Star Wars, alternate universe from the Republic Commando book series
Type: Clone, Null-class Advanced Recon Commando
Physical Appearance: Clone of Jango Fett. Eye color: dark brown, hair color: black, skin tone/type: light, Height: 1.83 meters (roughly 6 feet?), Weight 86 kilograms (roughly 190 pounds?), Distinguishing Features: a large scar on the left side of his face and arm, Posture: mostly rigid but in a way that suggests he's ready to spring into action in an instant, Other Notes: Wears a custom matte black version of the Katarn armor with a matching black ARCs pauldron and kama. T-visor is gold with a slight glow. Left arm is a durasteel prosthetic up to the shoulder (covered in a synthetic flesh coating)
Occupation: Clones don't get paid, but like the other Nulls he's very good at 'redirecting' any funds he might need.
Specialties: Ordinance and infiltration expert
Combat: Highly trained in hand-to-hand combat, melee combat, and ranged combat including a wide variety of both firearms and thrown weapons
Personality: As a direct quote from the books "fiercely loyal when the mood strikes him. When it doesn't he's instant death on legs." Jatne has an air of being far more relaxed than the typically ARC however inside he still has the same dual nature of a fully grown killer trained from birth and an innocent naive 10 year old boy.
Background: Like his Null Class brothers Jatne was meant to be reconditioned meaning terminated at the age of 2/5 (chronological/developmental) but was saved from that fate by a Mandalorian mercenary by the name of Kal Skirata. Unlike his Null Class brothers Jatne was never officially put into active duty regarded as unfit for service by the Grand Army after shooting and killing Orun Wa, the Kaminoan that sentenced the Nulls to be reconditioned. That didn't stop him from acting with his brothers as 'Kal's private army' the Nulls are completely loyal only to Kal and their brothers and thus impossible to be controlled by anyone else.


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Post by PandaFace Mon Oct 30, 2017 10:06 pm

Name: Lillian Priest
Universe: alternate Earth, extremely high tech, practically no ethics.
Type: psychic powerhouse
Physical Appearance:  Eye color: bright teal with a faint glow, hair color: brown with orange and red streaks, skin tone/type: tan, Height: 5'11", Weight: almost (but not quite) sickly slender, Distinguishing Features: metallic fixtures on her temples, 2 piercings on the left side of her lower lip, 8 piercings on her left ear and 6 on her right, 1 piercing on right nostril. Posture: Extremely limber but also tense (in a stressed out sort of way), Other Notes: typically wears tightly fit stretch jeans and cropped tankk tops with loose jackets.
Occupation: Lillian became a mercenary after deserting the Imperial American Army.
Specialties: disguises, stealth,  and acrobatics
Distinguishing Powers: Lillian reads surface thoughts but she can't turn it off and she has powerful telekinetics.
Combat: proficient with knives, handguns, and sniper rifles
Personality: keeps up a facade of cockiness but she's honestly never quite sure how many of her actions are voluntary or residual effects of the brainwashing from her time working for the government. Overall she's typically very friendly, but she gets a lethal attitude if she thinks she's being used against her will.
Background: Lillian was the 5th clone of a powerful but uncooperative subject. Created by the American Empire as a tool of war they thought they'd managed to weed out the undesirable traits from her progenitor, that is until she defected. They mildly brainwashed her knowing that if they were too heavy handed it would water down her reflexes and abilities, they wanted the best assassin they could make.
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Post by SuperAwesome Sun Mar 18, 2018 11:56 pm

Alright Spikey, I've done your bidding, I made a character and I even made it a female for you!

Name: Avalina DeLecroix
Universe: Medieval England AU
Type: Vampire mythos, feeds off memories and emotions, can be done by touch but most efficiently through the consumption of blood.
Physical Appearance: Eye color: pale green, hair color: golden blond, skin tone/type deathly pale, Height: 1.8 meters, Weight: slender but not thin,
Distinguishing Features: three emerald piercings on left cheekbone, Style: prefers extravagantly styles gowns in pale colors with little to no print, often with gold or silver trim, Posture: Very ‘regal’ graceful movements with rigid posture, Other Notes: Her eyes are always covered with a veil.
Occupation: Queen
Specialties: Politics, psychology, and entertainment (classical music and dance)
Distinguishing Powers: None, however she can to an extent read minds by selectively choosing memories to consume and using them to make an educated guess
Combat: She is inhumanly strong and a proficient martial artist however she prefers manipulating others into taking action for her.
Personality: Very proud and confident. She is often viewed as self-important and petty but in reality she’s simply accustomed to being royalty. She is however dangerously obsessive, she get’s what she wants or someone will die trying.
Background: Ophelia is referred to as the Shadow Queen. She simultaneously ruled over England, France, and Scotland using carefully groomed and manipulated puppets she called her ‘voices’ which were legitimate members of the monarchies. She started wars - even among her own subjects, religions, cults, rebellions, and even orchestrated disasters all to further her own goals.

I read through the other characters and decided on something that could match the ego of your Roxil character but less reliant on powers. So............ you're still the artsy one, right?

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Post by fenriSSoul Fri Aug 10, 2018 12:35 pm

Name: Kuthu Titanbreaker
Universe: Pathfinder (RPG)
Type: Halfling, Ranger-Planeswalker-Voidmancer
Physical Appearance: 76.2 cm tall, purple-tinged, short blonde hair, one milky eye one fully white eye, generally enraged, otherwise very serious.
Other Notes She is very serious unless she is drinking. She is a fun-loving, happy-as-fuck drunk who tends to forget that her old squad died when drunk.
Occupation: Hunting creatures she hates to kill them, then selling all of their stuff, bones, fur, eyeballs, other balls, earlobes, nipple tassels, etc.
Specialties: Hunting, rangering, and hating an inordinate amount of things.
Distinguishing Powers: She is a voidmancer so she.. mances void? She can use objects that she would instinctually by forming them out of void light as if they had an unbreakable quality, though when she stops using them actively, they tend to vanish. Drinking gets messy. Otherwise she can travel through shadows at stupid speeds, but any more than once without resting is exhausting.
Combat: Bows, arrows, generally together though sometimes she stabs the things with the pointy ends.
Personality: Introverted, quiet, and probably planning something. Easily enraged. When in rage mode, she screams and growls but does not form words, just fists. Made of arrows. Still, and always at home in a squad. Her personal feelings never interfere with achieving her and her squad's objectives.
Background: Kuthu grew up in a small halfling village at the base of a mountain in Pathfinder. Her village got slaughtered by giant, inbred, gross-ass ogres, and she joined the Sable Co. Marines. After joining an adventuring group under the King's advisement, she returned and watched her squad summarily ripped to a big pile of elder god feces and godammit. She began hunting other planes for said elder-god-like-dinosaur, killed it, traveled in the void too long to kill it, and in doing so became a Planeswalker. As she was traveling between planes, some transdimensional fuckery happened and that is a not-simplified-enough version of where she was and how she came to be in Creation.

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